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Madie
08-04-2009, 02:08 PM
I have an internship for my college as a graphic designer... this is my biggest project :)

This is gonna go in some of the hallways on campus


this is a brochure, front and back


inside pages


any constructive criticism is welcome :) Does it remind you too much of mcdonalds??

Chuck
08-04-2009, 02:11 PM
haha i thinks its really cool. and no, it doesnt remind me of mcdonalds lol. I like the meaning of FYRE'd up, its original. i like

Madie
08-04-2009, 02:14 PM
I didn't make the FYRE thing up... the department I'm doing it for did. I think it's kinda awkward and my boss keeps calling it fry lol

Sergio
08-04-2009, 02:32 PM
No way, I love it :D

Madie
08-04-2009, 03:02 PM
I edited the back a little :)

Josh
08-04-2009, 03:35 PM
really sweet madie! good work! :D

CosmicAVAfan
08-04-2009, 08:55 PM
I agree, it looks great.

devil
08-04-2009, 10:45 PM
It looks really good. The only suggestion I would have had is that the orbs looked too much like they were just floating for no reason, but the revised back made them grounded and framed the image. Great work!

Dirty Sanchez
08-05-2009, 12:35 AM
I like it! And no, it doesn't remind me of MCD's at all.

TheAdventure
08-13-2009, 12:26 PM
I know what you're saying about McDonalds cuz of the red and yellow. But it doesn't really remind me of that because of the black that you used.

It all looks super sick. Especially the revised back. Awesome job.