I'd like some feedback please.

[BoxcarKid18244]

I just finished the guitar for this song, and I love it. So I put it on our purevolume for you guys to give me some feed back on it.

www.purevolume.com/afterglory

It's called. *NEW* Untitled Song (Guitar only)

[headcheese]

i like the intro but the rythem guitar is too sudden, idk if with drums it would be more smooth, try to make a better transition to ur rythem guitar, and i would like the intro to be like 25seconds at least.


can u check out a clip of my new song feel it too please ?

http://profile.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=user.viewprofile&friendid=99817512